Almost straight out of fantastic planet. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fantastic_Planet
dont know that one..
You are quite proficient at cartooning, good work.
1) The scan quality on ALL of your submissions SUCKS!!! Fix whatever is causing the horizontal banding. (use a different scanner, if that is not possible, use a photo editing program to post process... whatever it takes.)
2) ALL of your submissions are preliminary sketches... develop any of your images for between 2-4 hours and resubmit it. (ink in everything, add color, etc...)
3) Research vector illustrations, they will help you immensley with shading and make everything look less flat.
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